BOOM! SCOOP! A slash of spoon
lightning scooped up the mountain of beyond and flew across the city of Torbay. The Noku’s of Terrabakia gathered in the hall. “It was outrageous” said one of the Noku’s “I can’t believe it” another Noku said. They argued away until the night was over. They settled back in their cottages and enjoyed the rest of the day.
The storm was horrifically bad. It made a big Catastrophe in Torbay, which left an awful city. All that was left was smashed schools, BUT……
One school imparticular was still standing in one piece with only a smashed sign from here to there. The school must have had no inconvenience of any sort the storm to leave a school in one piece. Not like other schools where it made a bomb site.
The language you use is sensational Oscar! Keep this up Oscar! You are an incredible writer. I hope you share your stories with family/ friends and teachers so you can keep receiving feedback! Feedback is very powerful!
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